Alienated
caught at unawares
out on a country road
Abducted by U.F.O. and taken
up to space in a flying saucer
Laid down and examined like
as if you were
a lab rat on
the table while
unable to budge
Paralyzed from head to toe
Struggling to regain sanity
as they put needles
through your eyes
-intolerable pain-
or could it all
just be a
spontaneous
release of
D.M.T.?
4 Bold Responses
excellent, a very effective concrete poem!
So far away from the concrete poetry we did at school...excellent stuff!!
Claire
very cool! now if i could snap a photograph of this imagination it would be grand.
that is original...!
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